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    Post by Mrpunisher on Wed Aug 26, 2009 9:45 pm

    Hi all , I have begun learning Photoshop for aweek or 10 days till now
    and that is all my work ,tell me what u think and what to do to improve it Smile






    and modified abit :-


    all till now Very Happy


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    Re: modified my last sig

    Post by Randy on Wed Aug 26, 2009 10:09 pm

    Great Job Very Happy
    i like how you do their shadows in low ocapity (or how ever u spell it Razz)
    The 2 Top 1ns are my favourites.
    The Top one gets a 9/10 cause its really good. its missing something though, not sure what. Very good Blending
    2nd one gets an 8/10 cause the colours are really good. the 2 things you gotta work on are finding new effects not just the shadows of the people in the back ground.
    Great job,
    Hope to see more from you,
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    Re: modified my last sig

    Post by David on Fri Aug 28, 2009 9:26 pm

    I agree The top is DEFINETLY the best~!
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    Re: modified my last sig

    Post by Minseok on Sat Aug 29, 2009 4:08 pm

    Looks real nice the 1st and 2nd are great..but you have to give props for who ever that did that city in the BG for the 2nd o_o
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    Post by Ewik on Mon Aug 31, 2009 12:22 am

    oops, i thot i already post in here..hehe sry bro Wink
    i love the top too...is it Mu character, Atif?
    great works, keep it up bro!

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    Post by Mrpunisher on Mon Aug 31, 2009 2:26 am

    thx for the comments Smile
    it is really useful
    nope Eric it isn't MU char , just ametal man I found on planetrenders may be not completely sure ,but I liked it and worked on it Very Happy
    here I made some more work 2 pics ,
    this 1 I was boring and I made it fast Smile but i like it



    and this 1 took soo much time ^^ but at last I think I got smthing not bad Smile




    w8ing for ur opinions Smile
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    Post by Ewik on Mon Aug 31, 2009 3:49 am

    i want to tickle the bottom one ^^ *tickle tickle* Very Happy great job Atif!

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    Re: modified my last sig

    Post by Mrpunisher on Mon Aug 31, 2009 10:45 pm

    Smile
    why not Ewik ,feel free to tickle Very Happy
    the 1 above it I made it without tuts,before I learn using brushes,C4D, and the curves colours and these things ^^,but keep on posting all my works here Smile
    I will try to make abetter 1 soon

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    Post by Mrpunisher on Thu Sep 03, 2009 12:39 am

    my last 1 for now



    what do u think

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    Re: modified my last sig

    Post by Mrpunisher on Fri Sep 04, 2009 2:24 am

    the last sig I made plz tell me ur opinions and rate me



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    Re: modified my last sig

    Post by GeneralSanta on Fri Sep 04, 2009 6:07 am

    Too much text x[
    Text sort of ruins the sig

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    Re: modified my last sig

    Post by b0wz3r on Fri Sep 04, 2009 6:13 am

    Probably it's just me but , you should put the light source a little bit up.

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    Post by Mrpunisher on Fri Sep 04, 2009 7:35 am

    yes general I know it has so much text but I made it for afriend who wanted all that text Sad I try to tell her to remove some Smile
    b0wz3r yeah I think u r right about that point to make giving the light to the face,thx for the advice Wink

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    Post by Mrpunisher on Fri Sep 04, 2009 10:01 pm

    I reduced the text and moved the light source abit up
    that is what I got :

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    Post by Ewik on Sat Sep 05, 2009 5:20 am

    Great composition Atif!
    Keep it up.

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    Re: modified my last sig

    Post by Mrpunisher on Fri Sep 11, 2009 4:58 am

    thx for comments and advice

    and here is my last works ,,












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    Re: modified my last sig

    Post by Tips on Fri Sep 11, 2009 7:33 am

    ahhaa u made snif the oreo sig ;p that was my idea but i just never got around to do it xD

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    Post by Mrpunisher on Fri Sep 11, 2009 11:08 am

    yeah he gave me alink for it ,then I turned it into arender ,it was really easy to be rendered Very Happy
    then I worked on it Smile

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    Re: modified my last sig

    Post by Mrpunisher on Fri Sep 11, 2009 11:10 am

    I modified the last pic btw ,changed some font and abit modify about colours


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    Re: modified my last sig

    Post by Mrpunisher on Sun Sep 20, 2009 2:46 am

    well,that is my last work ... I tried to put the render out of the border as I saw some make
    that is what I did first

    and after making it out the border


    what do u think and how to improve ?
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